Friday, July 15, 2005

I'm in such a strange mood tonight.

the bug
needed a hug.
He searched high,
he searched low,
and eventually fell into a mug.
Poor Thug.

It's actually got a deeper message. Searching for a hug could get'cha killed. Yay.

I'm in such a strange mood tonight. More sugar, anyone?

(My word count is below 100, for once! Heh. The word-limit idea is from Torment, and I'm feeling more inarticulate than usual, so I'll stop now.)


Blogger Jervin said...

hey you are good writer yourself too. damn that poem is original. i also never know that i have a fan silently reading my post. haha anyway i like that poem of yours. just add you to my list.

Sat Jul 16, 03:31:00 AM  
Anonymous Kyels said...


Thug the poor bug is a good poem. Really nice. Keep it up.

Peace. :)

Sat Jul 16, 09:58:00 AM  
Blogger kabloona said...

ha-ha. funny poem!

Sat Jul 16, 10:39:00 AM  
Blogger vivian said...

Real cute poem. LOL

Sat Jul 16, 10:00:00 PM  
Blogger JUEI said...

while i was enjoying the little poem, i actually got caught by the sentence : "It's actually got a deeper message. Searching for a hug could get'cha killed."

That's SO REAL! Such a philosophy!

Sun Jul 17, 01:10:00 AM  
Blogger Chienne said...

god. it's so hard to limit word count! hahahahah.. i know i wouldn't be able to condense my ramblings into such a short passage.

by the way the need for hugs can lead to a hell lotta trouble. such as paying too big a price. LOL.

Sun Jul 17, 03:41:00 PM  
Anonymous Carm said...

Well, we learn something new everyday. Heheh.

Sun Jul 17, 04:39:00 PM  
Blogger narrowband said...

Anyone needs a hug, I can hug anytime :p

Thu Jul 28, 01:15:00 AM  
Blogger torment said...

Hi my dear! Neglecting your poor blog and poor readers! huh...

Sat Aug 06, 12:00:00 AM  
Anonymous Kyels said...

Hi Delevia,

Where are you? The aliens have abducted you away?

Please come back!!!

Sun Aug 14, 11:47:00 AM  

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