Friday, July 15, 2005

I'm in such a strange mood tonight.

Thug
the bug
needed a hug.
He searched high,
he searched low,
and eventually fell into a mug.
Poor Thug.

It's actually got a deeper message. Searching for a hug could get'cha killed. Yay.

I'm in such a strange mood tonight. More sugar, anyone?

(My word count is below 100, for once! Heh. The word-limit idea is from Torment, and I'm feeling more inarticulate than usual, so I'll stop now.)

10 Comments:

Blogger Jervin said...

hey you are good writer yourself too. damn that poem is original. i also never know that i have a fan silently reading my post. haha anyway i like that poem of yours. just add you to my list.

Sat Jul 16, 03:31:00 AM  
Anonymous Kyels said...

Hey!!!

Thug the poor bug is a good poem. Really nice. Keep it up.

Peace. :)

Sat Jul 16, 09:58:00 AM  
Blogger kabloona said...

ha-ha. funny poem!

Sat Jul 16, 10:39:00 AM  
Blogger vivian said...

Real cute poem. LOL

Sat Jul 16, 10:00:00 PM  
Blogger JUEI said...

while i was enjoying the little poem, i actually got caught by the sentence : "It's actually got a deeper message. Searching for a hug could get'cha killed."

That's SO REAL! Such a philosophy!

Sun Jul 17, 01:10:00 AM  
Blogger Chienne said...

god. it's so hard to limit word count! hahahahah.. i know i wouldn't be able to condense my ramblings into such a short passage.

by the way the need for hugs can lead to a hell lotta trouble. such as paying too big a price. LOL.

Sun Jul 17, 03:41:00 PM  
Anonymous Carm said...

Well, we learn something new everyday. Heheh.

Sun Jul 17, 04:39:00 PM  
Blogger narrowband said...

Anyone needs a hug, I can hug anytime :p

Thu Jul 28, 01:15:00 AM  
Blogger torment said...

Hi my dear! Neglecting your poor blog and poor readers! huh...

Sat Aug 06, 12:00:00 AM  
Anonymous Kyels said...

Hi Delevia,

Where are you? The aliens have abducted you away?

Please come back!!!

Sun Aug 14, 11:47:00 AM  

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